Run Lola Run Presentation Critique

My group, which consisted of Xeryus, Tres and myself, was in charge of evaluating the "Camera" section of Run Lola Run. We presented our slides based on sections. I took the sections regarding composition and framing. I took multiple examples of shots in the film that I thought showed Tom Tykwer's stylistic approach to the film. There were many shots that emphasized distance and I discussed how these shots are important to reveal especially in this type of action movie. I discussed composure as it includes the use of lines, background, placement of objects along the rule of thirds, and other aspects such as lead room and headroom. What I should have focused more on was how it  affected Tykwer's work as a whole. When it came to the section of framing, I didn't use as much film language as I would have wanted to because of my lack of understanding with the topic. I thought I did have some good points, though such as how a shot can tell a story, but once again, I needed to synthesize these examples with the rest of the film.

I thought some strengths of my presentation included slide design and the comfort I had with my slides. By having little text in my slide, it allowed me to not depend on pre-written idea, but instead elaborate as I progressed. This actually had me come up with additional analysis as I progressed through slides. I got out some ideas that I had not previously thought of. I made sure my group had time to rehearse our presentation so that we wouldn't feel nervous going up not having gone over the slideshow so because of this, I was able to familiarize myself a little more before.

Areas that need improvement, which are also addressed above include the need to synthesize the film as a whole. This can help reveal the director's intent and their styles. I need to improve on understanding why the director does certain things the way they do like how sometimes, Tom Tykwer decides not to follow the rule of thirds and he does not always have certain aspects the way we expect. An example would be the unique sound design. By improving my understanding of director's intent, I believe that I can enjoy films in ways I haven't been able to before. By doing so, I can improve on my own film knowledge through the evaluation of established film directors.